The Flock

Veterans in today’s society are mistreated, homeless, or suffer from one or more of many mental illnesses. Here’s our story of a bird symbolizing the life of a veteran being unfairly treated.

the flock

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3 thoughts on “The Flock

  1. I agree with the main point of your story, like i really like how you made the character join the “flock” to provide for his family. I think a lot of people can connect to it because we all at one point would do what he can for those we love.

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  2. The personification in this story was interesting. It reminds of “Mause”, a book about the holocaust. In the story, the characters are portrayed as mice and rats. This personification really helps to make the story more engaging and add more depth. I also like how the story was simple enough for a child to understand, but it still has a greater meaning.

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  3. I like the idea of the story and the story itself but I think that as a children’s book, children wouldn’t really understand the real problems veterans face.

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